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This week we start a new register, where we will learn many interesting topics that will help us to improve our compositions. In this time we learned new types of essays, the cause and effect essays and two new methods that we help us to create our outline. FOCUS-ON-CAUSES METHOD and FOCUS-ON-EFFECTS METHOD.
For this week, we will work with both methods. So here is my short part of my cause and effect essays.
FOCUS-ON-CAUSES METHOD
1. Narrowing
Topic: The causes of divorce
Specific: Why do parents get divorced?
2. Prewriting technique
Brainstorming
- Infidelity and jealousy
- Lack of communication between them
- Constant fights
- Bad economy
- Crisis (lack of employment)
- Repressed emotions
- Sometimes they fall in love with other people
- Lack of compromise
- Incompatibility
3.
Thesis statement:
Nowadays many couples are getting
divorce for differents reasons, those include: Personal problems, Lack of love
between couple and Social factors.
4.
Outline
Introduction:
- Thesis statement
- Background, my opinion about divorce
- Why they do that?
Body
P1-
Personal problems.
- Infidelity and jealousy
- Lack of communication between them.
- Constant fights
P2-
Lack of love between couple.
- Repressed emotions
- Sometimes they fall in love with other
people
- Lack of compromiso
- Incompatibility
P3-
Social factors
- Bad economy
- Crisis (lack of employment)
Conclusion:
Our parents get divorce for
many reasons why sometimes we do not understand or do not know, but what we do
know is that they do it because they do no longer love each other or because there
is no longer that spark in them that motivated them in a moment to take that
step.
FOCUS-ON-EFFECTS METHOD
1. Narrowing
Topic: Stress impact on health
Specific: How stress can affect your body health?
2. Prewriting technique
Brainstorming
- Sleep problems
- Headache
- Fatigue
- Muscle tension or pain
- Exercising less often
- Angry outbursts
- Drug or alcohol misuse
- Lack ofmotivation or focus
- Anxiety
- Sadness or depresion
3.
Thesis statement:
Most people are unaware of how stress
can bring them closer to death.
4.
Outline
Introduction:
- Thesis statement
- My opinion and experience about Stress
Body
P1-
How it affect your body.
- Most of them suffer of fatigue and have
some sleeping problems
- People must of the time suffer from
headache and muscle tension or pain
P2-
How it affect on your behaviour
- Exercising les often
- Angry outbursts
- Drug or alcohol misuse
P3-
How it affect your mood
- Lack of motivation or focus and or
depression in most of the people
- It cause anxiety
Conclusion:
As we know Stress is a natural and mental reaction that we have all gone through at some point in our life, but with help of some healthy techniques we can manage the stress that we accumulate in a given time.
Interesting ideas to develop!
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