EFFECT ESSAY

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For this week we have to create an effect essay for our second evaluation of the third register, with the general topic: "Sport on people since a young age" And we make it more specific, for this evaluation we need to make our activity complete again, so here you have my final composition. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

FOCUS-ON-EFFECT ESSAY

1. Narrowing

    General: Sport on people since a young age.

    Specific: Why do people prefer soccer as a sport since a young age?

2. Prewriting technque

Clustering

    -  Improves cardiovascular health

    - Reduce body fat

    - Strengthens bones

    - Popularity

    - Better paid

    - Support

    - Helps to distract yourself

    - Remove stress

3.   Thesis statement:

Most kids and young people choose this sport because they derive immense benefits from playing soccer in regards to your physique and fitness, it also in your emotional and mental well-being.

4   4. Outline:

Introduction

-          Thesis statement

-          Facts about soccer

-          My opinion about soccer

Body

             P1- It benefits our body

-          Improves cardiovascular health

-          Reduce body fat

-          Strengthens bones

P2- Because it is better than any other sport 

-          Popularity

-          Better paid

-          Support.

P3- It benefit your mood

-          Helps to distract yourself

-          Remove stress

-          Builds self-confidence in those who practice it

Conclusion:

To sum up, soccer despite being a sport that benefits the body and our state of mind, requires game strategies so it involves the structuring of plays and other techniques required, in general I could say that soccer is a very recognized sport worldwide and I recommend children and young people to practice it.          

3.      5. Draft (editing, revising and proofreading)

3.       6 . Final composition 

  

Why do people prefer soccer as a sport since a young age?

At what age can I start practicing soccer? Is often a recurring question asked by young people. However, there are studies that indicate that the best age to start practicing a sport is between 9 and 10 years old, since the child begins to acquire the necessary skills to practice the sport. Therefore most kids and young people choose this sport because they derive immense benefits from playing soccer in regards to their physique and fitness, as well as your emotional and mental well-being. This sport is one of the most popular and recognized all over the world by the different teams known today, such as Real Madrid, Barcelona, Juventus, etc. Nowadays soccer is chosen as the best sport ever for different reasons.

First of all, it benefits our body. Soccer is one of the best sports that helps the body in different ways: helps to improve cardiovascular health, one of the best exercises for the heart is running, which is why soccer is on the list of sports that promote cardiovascular health. Also helps to reduce body fat, because of the intense activities that are performed such as running, jumping,etc. Bones are also strengthened by the practice of soccer when performing some high intensity activities, therefore our body also tends to gain shape. Personally I consider that this sport helps and benefits our whole body in a great way.

Second, Because it is better than any other sport, every fan and lover of soccer will confirm this point, since the passion that is experienced in a soccer game does not compare with anything. Popularity, nowadays soccer is becoming more famous because of the World Cup, where all the countries fight to qualify and where the best soccer players from all over the world participate, this makes young people decide to practice this sport at a young age. Better paid, this is another thing that people see before practicing a sport, as we know, sports in general are very well paid especially soccer, we can see that the great soccer players like Cristiano Ronaldo or Messi earn millions to practice this sport, and that is why many young people choose to practice this sport. In addition, this sport has a lot of support from many well-known brands that sponsor these teams and even carry out leagues or world championships. I think soccer is one of the most influential sports and undoubtedly one of the best in the world.

Last but not least, It benefits your mood. Undoubtedly, soccer improves your overall mood and makes you feel better. It also helps to distract yourself, which is something that everyone who practices this sport enjoys a lot and forgets everythings for that moment. It removes stress, as well as depression and anxiety, this sport helps in a great way because most of those who practice this sport tend to carry a lot of stress, so they tend to eliminate these moods to exercise and perform their practices. And builds self-confidence in those who practice it. This sport can help improve self-confidence as well as team players, to achieve personal and group goals and to better develop their skills, and it can also help to increase self-esteem.

To sum up, soccer despite being a sport that benefits the body and our state of mind, requires game strategies so it involves the structuring of plays and other techniques required, in general I could say that soccer is a very recognized sport worldwide and I recommend children and young people to practice it.