FOCUS-ON-CAUSE METHOD

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For this week we have to create a cause essay for our first evaluation of the third register, with the general topic: "Why do people find ASMR (autonomic sensory meridian response) YouTube videos comforting?" And we make it more specific, the only difference for this activity is that we had to make our activity complete, that is with the following points:

1. Narrowing

2. Prewriting technique

3. Thesis statement

4. Outline

5. Draft (editing, revising and proofreading)

6. Final composition

So here is my final composition. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it

FOCUS-ON-CAUSES METHOD

1. Narrowing

General: "Why do people find ASMR (autonomic sensory meridian response) YouTube videos comforting?" 

Specific: Why do people decide watching ASMR videos on Youtube?

2. Prewriting technique

Clustering 

    - Stimulates the body

    - Facilitates meditation

    - It helps to sleep

    - Relieve stress

    - People see it because is has anything to do 

    - Lack of interaction between people

3. Thesis statement:

Nowadays many people watch ASMR videos on Youtube for differents reasons, amoung them we have: To relax, To avoid sleeplessness and Boredom.

4. Outline

Introduction:

-          Thesis statement

-          Facts about why people find ASMR videos relaxing

-          My opinion about ASMR videos

Body

P1- To relax

-          Many people tend to feel stimulation in their body.

 

-       It helps to have a better meditation facility.

 

P2-   To avoid sleeplessness

 

-          IT helps to sleep.

 

-          Helps to relieve stress.

 

P3- Lack of education or knowledge

-          People see it because it has anything to do.

-          Lack of interaction between people

 

Conclusion:

To sum up, this type of video helps us a lot in different ways by its soft sounds, different sounds with the mouth and whispers that can cause an effect of relaxation to the body and so feel at the time of listening and also gives a false sense of personal attention.

5. Draft (editing, revising and proofreading)

6. Final composition

Why do people decide watching ASMR videos on Youtube?

Have you ever thought how to get rid of stress or get bored? Nowadays many people have opted to watch videos on Youtube the famous ASMR, this type of video has become popular for its great impact it has given today. According to Cline a 2015 study shows a large number of men and women who watch these videos for the following reasons 98% did it to relax, 82% with the idea of fighting insomnia and another 82% also to get rid of stress. This time you can not only watch videos on Youtube you can listen to music, watch makeup tutorials or kill time as they say. This kind of videos are the ones you will find trending, because they are gaining a lot of being widely liked due to the experiences you can acquire when you watch or listen to them. Nowadays many people watch ARSM videos on Youtube for different reasons, among them we have: To relax, To avoid sleeplessness and Boredom.

Watching videos on Youtube causes a good feeling in all people especially when they watch or listen to ASMR videos, First of all they do it to relax, this is something that you can always get to feel when listening to these types of videos, relaxation is an essential part that our body needs on certain occasions therefore, we choose to stimulate our body through visualization by these trends as are the tingling that can be perceived around our body as in the spine, our hands, etc. And it can also help us to have a better facility for meditation, which gives us a sense of calm and inner peace and can also help reduce negative emotions. Personally these types of videos help me to relax a lot and, on the one hand, to concentrate better.

Second, to avoid sleeplessness, sleep problems can affect our daily life by preventing us from sleeping at night, so many people seek various options to fall asleep, and one of them are the ASMR videos, they can help us sleep and thus avoid some diseases that can arise in our body over time by not sleeping the right time.  And it also helps to relieve stress, listening to this kind of sounds can help in a great way to reduce stress, therefore many opt for this kind of sounds or images.  In my case these videos help me a lot when I can't sleep, sometimes I don't even feel when I fall asleep.

Last but not least, boredom is something that many of us go through lately and it has a lot to do with our mood, lack of distraction or not doing interesting things to do, listen or watch, so we decide to watch videos like this one. People see it because they have nothing to do such as: they don't go out anymore or do activities that they used to do. Lack of interaction between people is also another thing why people get bored and choose to watch videos on youtube.

To sum up, this type of video help us a lot in different ways by its soft sounds, different sounds with the mouth and whispers that can cause an effect of relaxation to the body and so feel at the time of listening and also gives a false sense of personal attention.

HERE YOU HAVE A VIDEO ABOUT ASMR. ENJOY IT

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WAKjzzAAYRo