Evaluation 1

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Last week we had the first evaluation of the second register and we had to do a COMPARE AND CONTRAST ESSAY, to sum up the topic that I select was Early morning workout or late night workout, which is better? So, not to make it so long I would like to share with you my composition 

Outline: Subject by Subject Essay

Early morning workout or late night workout, which is better?

Introduction:

Have you ever asked yourself what is the best time to workout, whether it is in the morning or at night? An ideal opportunity to workout depends largely on you or whenever you can and that is also important for our health and life. But for some people, it is better to workout in the morning for the simple fact that they make their routine better, they are fresh, etc, others people prefer at night because go to bed more relaxed etc. But let me share with you some important reasons I think people choose every moment to workout.

Paragraph n°1: Early Morning Workout.

Point 1: Time

-       People have more time to do their correct workout routine correctly.

Point 2: Comfort

-       People who get up early, can have more energy, space and equipment to do their routines.

Point 3: Freedom

-       People who workout at morning have the privilege of do their own routine.

Paragraph n°2: Late Night Workout.

Point 1: Time

-       People have less control with their own routine because they don't have enough time to train.

Point 2: Comfort

-       People who work, tend to workout at night, so they do not have the time and space to do the right routine.

Point 3: Freedom

-       People who workout at night do not have many hours or liberty to do other activities or differents routines.   

Conclusion:

To sum up both schedules to workout have their differences; but that depends on the person and what suits them best, but what time do you prefer to workout in the morning or at night?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Early morning workout or late night workout, which is better?

 

Have you ever asked yourself what is the best time to workout, whether it is in the morning or at night? An ideal opportunity to workout depends largely on you or whenever you can and that is also important for our health and life. But for some people, it is better to workout in the morning for the simple fact that they make their routine better, they are fresh, etc, others people prefer at night because go to bed more relaxed etc. But let me share with you some important reasons I think people choose every moment to workout.

Early morning workout is essential for people who usually train in the morning, and who do it as a daily routine. Time is important for those who workout in the morning, for example People have more time to do their workout routine correctly. Also some people usually have their hour to train as at 6, 7 or 8 in the morning. Comfort is very important since most people look for comfort as something fundamental in any aspect, in this case of early morning workout, people who get up early, can have more energy, space and equipment to do their routines and thus make the most of the body's total capacity to perform the training. Freedom is a special privilege that all people have. People who workout in the morning have the privilege of doing their own routine, and have the rest of the day to do their daily activities, so that means in this case it is better to workout in the morning.

Late Night Workout is about keeping going composedness between exercising, dining and sleep. Time in this case people have less control with their own routine because they don't have enough time to train, with people who work and train it is more difficult since because of the work in some cases they could not workout, due to fatigue or time. Comfort, people who work, tend to workout at night, so they do not have the time and space to do the right routine, so that means they don't feel comfortable with the environment. And freedom, people who workout at night do not have many hours or liberty to do other activities or different routines, so my recommendation in this case is that if you work, you should better manage your time so that you do not present any inconvenience or do not have impediments to workout.

To sum up both schedules to workout have their differences; but that depends on the person and what suits them best, but what time do you prefer to workout in the morning or at night?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Organizing your paper (Outlines)

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                                                                 Welcome again to my blog!

In this week we learned two differents outlines. We learned about Point by point stucture and Subject by suject structure, each one describe different method to created an outline. 

POINT-BY-POINT: In this type of structure you can examine one aspect of one subject or object and the same aspect of the second subject but within the same paragraph, for example: 

SUBJECT-BY-SUBJECT: With this kind of structure you address each subject in separate paragraphs, for example:

Now I would like to share with you my practice of the week

 

Prewriting technique:

Topic n°1: Venn diagram (Point by point)

Topic n°2: Chart (Subject by subject)

 

Proof topic n°1:

Proof topic n°2:

Outline topic n°1

Students Who Work and Unemployed Students: Who takes the best of this Life?

Point by point

Introduction:

Have you ever ask yourself about what are the differences and similities between students who work or unemployed students? Let me tell you some of the most common.

Paragraph 1: Students who Works and unemployed students, who have more advantage?

·         The students who work, have to pay their own studies.

·         Unemployed students have someone who pay for their studies

·         Both of them have the same academic responsabilities, but in a different way.

Paragraph 2: Students who work and unemployed students can buy their own things?

·         The students who work have the capability to buy their own things, and also save money.

·        Unemployed students depend on their parent´s to buy their things and also they have a limit on what they can buy.

·         Both students have the same learning process, but each one develop as best as they can.

Paragraph 3: Students who work and unemployed students have the same free time?

·         The students who work do not have much free time, but most of them have day off once in a week.

·      Unemployed students just have the responsability with their Studies, that’s means that they have enough time to do activities and homeworks.

·          Both have the same Schedule if they studie the same carrer, but each one have to organize their time as the best suits them.

Conclusion:

To sum up, each kind of students who work or unemployed students have the same capability and posibility to achieve their goals, but it does not matter what type of students you are, just remember achieve what you want!

Outline topic n°2

Driving a Car or Riding a Bus, which works for university students?

Subject by subject

Introduction:

                Have you ever ask yourself what is the best option to go to the University and which transport is the most convenient? Let me share with you some aspects that we need to know.

 Object 1: Driving a Car

·         Point 1: Time

-          Students do not worry with the time and the trajectory because, they control their own time.

·         Point 2: Cost

-          Students spend more money for the gasoline, car maintenance and parking

·         Point 3: Comfort

-          Students are free to do their want such as listening to music, etc.

Object 2: Riding a bus

·         Point 1: Time

-          Students must to get up early to avoid being late to class.

·         Point 2: Cost

-          Students only pay the bus fare.

·         Point 3: Comfort

-          Students usually leave in full transport.

Conclusion:

In short, both means of transportation have advantages and disadvantages; but that depends of the students and what suits them best, but what would you choose?

 

Compare and Contrast Essay II

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In this week´s class we discuss about the WRITING A COMPARE/CONTRAT ESSAY PART II in that introduced to two new prewriting techniques:

1. Venn diagram: that consist about creating a composition between two or more events, objects, and is used to creating an outline for a compare and contrat essay.

2. Chart: this consists of a box that criteria you want to focus on in comparing the items

Here is an example of a new technique that we learned this week

CHART

 

Driving a car or Riding a bus?

 

In El Salvador it is common to see people travel by bus to go to their jobs, shopping etc, but now more cars are observed than buses. Nowadays having a car is not luxury is a necessity but not all people have the possibility of buying or having one. But have you ever asked yourself about what is better, travel by car or by bus? Well, I would like to share with you some differences aspects between travel by car and travel by bus.

First, time is important for those who driving and for those who travel by public transport (buses), in the case of traveling by bus, the passenger does not care about the trajectory, but the time, which lasts the trip to their destination, but speaking of the driver is the one who gets tired and is the one who must measure the time of the trip, but in the case of people who drive their own car driving for many hours is very exhausting, but they control their own time.

Second, the Cost, this changes depending on the situation, in the case of travel by bus the passenger just pay for the ticket fare with an accesible Price for example: $0.25, $0.35 cents or depeding of the trajectory of the bus and the route, but if you use the car you have to buy gasoline, for maintenance, pay for parkig etc, and other things that can cost a lot, so my recomendation in this case is travel by bus because you can save money.

Third, The traffic stress, this is something that many people struggle to avoid, but that always happens. In the case of traveling by bus, you reduce stress, because you do not have to drive, and if you are sit, you can have a nap while in traffic, but in the case of the driver has to deal with the traffic, but if you travel by car, you might stress if there are any accident, and you have to wait in line and you have to deal with traffic.

On the other hand, findind parking is so difficult in some ways, if you are travel by bus, that is not a problem, because the transport driver leaves the Passenger in front of the stop of their destination, but if you travel by car in some places such as mall, restaurants, etc, is difficult and stressful to find a parking space, so that means in that case is better travel by bus.

And the last but not the least, the comfort is very important since most people look for comfort as something fundamental in any aspect, but in the case of travel by bus sometimes it is bad or uncomfortable, the passenger usually sits with unknown people, and also that transportation usually comes full and personally I could say that it's very uncomfortable for people to push you or pass you carrying, but if you travel by car you are free to do you want such as listening your favorite music, make up if you are girl etc, and also you travel with your family or friends.

To sum up, both means of transport have their differences; but that depends of the person and what suits them best, but where would you prefer to travel by car or by bus?

 

Compare and contrast essays.

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Now that we are starting a new register, the first topic was about compare and contrast essays, you might ask, what is that about? well, the compare and contrast essays the main idea of those types of essays is to compare and find the differences between two topics that might look the same, in this oportunity I would like to share with you a video that I think you will find interesting, this is about dogs and cats and their differences and similarities, I hope you enjoy it!! 

Also I would like to share with you my composition about cats and dogs and their differences, and if you want to know more about how different their are you can watch this video 

Having a cat or having a dog, which is the best one?

Cats and dogs are the most favorite and common pets in the whole world. Cats and dogs since ancient times have been one of the many pets that has been considered a favorite by people in the world. But we know some differences that characterize them one from the other. For one thing cats are more generally cheaper and less demanding and more independent pets, but on the other, dogs are obedient, loyal but require more attention and love than the cats, but what do you think is better? What is it that draws people's attention to choosing between a dog or a cat? Now I would like to show you some differences between them.

First, cats are usually solitary animals and they don't mind being left home alone, so you don't have to worry about leaving them alone, even though they sleep all day if possible. Dogs are animals with more feelings and they will wait for you at the door all day, without moving at any time. This is something that characterizes them from others, they are honest, loving, and you have them unconditionally at all times.

Second, cats will love you in their own way, that is, they do not always show that affection to their owners or even sometimes they believe that they are superior to their owners, an example of this is my cats, they do what they want at all. Sometimes they even pretend to be the important ones and think they are more than one. In the case of dogs, they will love you if you treat them well or, sometimes, whatever happens, they show their love with caresses, moving their tails, licking you etc. They are unconditional and will love you no matter how you are.

 To sum up, pets are important in our life because they help people manage loneliness and reduce the stress of life. In my case I have 3 cats, 2 dogs and 1 turtle and I love them in the same way. Now tell me which pet do you prefer and want in your life?

Persuasive Writing

Persuasive Letter 

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This week's topic was persuasive writing to be specific in essays, basically it is a piece of academic writing in which you can expose your opinion in clear arguments if you are agree or disagree with something. I would like to share with you some writing steps for persuasive essays.

1. Take a position.

2. Know your audience.

3. Research your topic.

Also here I leave you an image to facilitate the understanding of writing persuasive essay 

Now I would like to share with you my Persuasive letter, I hope you agree with me why I wrote this letter and why rule should be changed at school.

Dear Principal Ms. Ruano. 

I am writing you this letter to express to you my disagreement with one of the school rules that you have approved since 2019. I understand that this rule was accepted by yourself, with the aim of having a better learning process, and communication between students, without distraction of the technology, but I'm pretty sure that it does not affect the learning method of the students. That is why I want to point out one of the rules that I consider is unnecessary in the internal regulations of the School. 

The school rule that I do not agree with, is that they do not accept cellphones or other type of technology in the School, I know that they do it so that students are not distracted and not be learning obstacle in the classes; but I think that this rule do not affect the teaching-learning process in students, on the contrary it would help us to have greater knowledge and would be a tool for new learning, according to the expert Olga Mendoza (Mexico) "The most important of the use of ICTs within the classroom is to have an action plan: Methodology of the use of these tools". With this reference I would like to change your point of view related with the rule, to implement the technology in our learning process, I know that you have your rules established, so that those rules are complied with and so that no one breaks them, but I would like to recommend that you change it, so that we have better learning opportunities.

But on the other hand I want to congratulate you for the great work that you are doing with the school because despite not being a prestigious or recognized institution it does everything in its power. 

Best regards, 

-Damaris C.

Film Review

 FILM REVIEW. 

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This week's topic was about film review in which learned how to critique a film and providing an original opinion without giving away too much of the plot. (Spoilers)

I would like to share with you some things that we can use to rate or ponder the plot of a film.

1. Great: Basically this is to share a good opinion about the film, for me it could be a 70-80% in which you express that you really enjoyed the film. For example for me a great movie is "Shrek".

2. Okay: For me this could be a 50% of the plot  I could consider it more or less or as it says "passable", but it could not be considered bad either. For example for me a Okay movie is "Guardians of the Galaxy"

3. Bad: This could be considered as less than 50% in which the film was ugly and they didn't like it or as they say "kicking". For example for me a bad movie is "Star Wars"

Well, with this brief explanation of what we learned this week, I would like to share with you my composition. I hope you liked it. 

Made of honor: Everything goes through for a reason.

Has it ever happened to you that you wanted to be the protagonist of a series or film? To be honest with you that has been my dream; Watching a movie that grabs your attention from the beginning to the end of the plot could be considered one of your favorites for the simple fact that you enjoyed it, it is funny or because you cried because of how beautiful it was, sometimes it makes you look over it. Over and over and you could say you never get tired of seeing it, so let me tell you a little bit about the made of honor movie. 

Released in 2008 directed by Paul Weiland and written by Adam Sztykiel is a famous film known for being an American romantic comedy, but it is not just the typical romance movie, this film can make you laugh, sigh or even tears in which much of the plot takes place in New York and Scotland, where a strong bond of friendship grows between the protagonists Patrick Dempsey, Michelle Monaghan and Kevin McKidd also known for their roles in Grey’s Anatomy serie where they play the role of doctors. 

Some of the many reasons why I like and enjoyed this romantic film are, first of all your best friends always will be there to support you and regardless of the nonsense you do, this is something I would have always liked to have, friends who will always support you in everything, but it is clear that sometimes is only seen in the movies; second that sometimes love comes when you least expect it and with whom you least imagine, this is something that i'm sure that if it can happen at some point to fall in love with the person you least expected.

 To sum up this film, it's completely funny and romantic. It will make you fall in love with the characters and it will make you not get tired of watching it. Then you wait, go see it, you will have a good time! 

PROPAGANDA IN PERSUASIE WRITING

 PROPAGANDA The art of persuasion 

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Now you will find a good video that I recomend you to watch RIGHT NOW!!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JoL5ukBTwcY

This week the topic was propagada in persuasive writing that it is the spread of information or ideas with the purpose of influencing somenthing or buy products, most propaganda use emotional thinking in which they try to change the mind of the readers.

Also we discuss about the three types of propaganda that are:

1. Bandwagon appeal:  Persuade the reader to do, think or buy something just because of its popularity or because everyone is doing it, for example: BTS Meal.

2. Emotional appeal: Persuade the reader by using words that appeal to the reader's emotional instead of a logical reason for example: "Save ralph".

3. Testimonial attempts: Persuade the reader by using a famous person to endorse a product or idea for example: Selena Gomez Pantene commercial.

Guys this is the propaganda that catch my attention.

MY COMPOSITION

Two productivity habits that works for me 

 

It always seems impossible until it's done -Nelson Mandela. To be productive is not necessarily to have a talent, either it's not a trait we are born with, to be productive it’s something that we all learned from trial and error, make smart decisions about tasks, events and the most important putting it into practice. For me productivity is making something that makes me feel good that marks the personality of who we are, that also something that marks us and helps us to be better both mentally and emotionally, The key to being productive is believing in yourself that we can do what we want and believing that nothing is impossible.

Starting strong is a habit that works for me, starting with a good attitude and thinking that all that we propose to do it we can achieve, I know that not every day is the same but it’s important that we never change our mind that we can start our days strong, I could say that I’m not the person who that start every day with the right foot but I’m tried to do it most of the times and when I can, since start the quarantine I set out to be better to do everything regardless how hard it was, and it is something that I don’t regret and what I will continue to do. 

Defining your why, this is something that always asks me, What is my why? Is a feel-good feeling or why should i do it, this is something complicated to understand but I have the answer to this, it is easy! because I like because I feel sure of who I am, I also do things because I like them and not to leave the commitment, feeling the need to move on and continue without seeing or hearing what they will say, that’s the reason why. To sum up productivity habits can be a real challenge at times, but once habits are established in us we benefit forever.